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Nez · Posted: Thu Oct 07, 2004 8:26 pm Post subject: Fanfic- All of Me

Okeedokee, this is my first Aladdin fanfic.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2082865/1/

Will appreciate feedback.

Thank you.

xfkirsten · Posted: Thu Oct 07, 2004 10:33 pm Post subject:

Off to a good start! I'm always glad to see Mozenrath stories. Smile

BTW, The Bellevue you're from... is that Bellevue, WA, by any chance? I grew up there. Smile

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Calluna · Posted: Fri Oct 08, 2004 6:22 am Post subject:

I thought the Eden and Dahndi scene was really cute. You've really got Eden's voice down. I wasn't sure what the story was meant to signify until I saw Mozenrath was in it... Wink

PS - Or Bellevue, NE? Very close to here...

Nez · Posted: Fri Oct 08, 2004 7:17 am Post subject:

Thanks. Working on the next chapter. I really never seen enough fanfics about Eden and Dhandi. They had a lot of potential to be awesome characters, even though they had like only two episodes.

FYI- I am in Bellevue, NE. Maybe I should have specified in my profile.

Calluna · Posted: Fri Oct 08, 2004 2:55 pm Post subject:

Well, holy crap! Before I edited my profile it used to say Omaha. Shocked

Nez · Posted: Sun Oct 10, 2004 12:16 pm Post subject:

Chapter two is now up!

Nez · Posted: Fri Oct 15, 2004 8:59 pm Post subject:

Third Chapter is up! Read and review please!

Nez · Posted: Wed Nov 03, 2004 8:58 am Post subject:

Fourth chapter is up!
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Nez · Posted: Mon Nov 08, 2004 1:46 pm Post subject:

Chapter five!
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Princess Lydia · Elemental Joined: 12 Nov 2004 Posts: 679

Oh it is a good story so far I can't wait till you do the next chapter! It is pretty confusing on what Mozenrath has done to Dhandi? Shocked

Wow it is going to be a great story when you are done!! I can't wait for the next chapter keep up the good work!! Very Happy

Nez · Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2004 8:52 pm Post subject:

Don't worry. It'll all be explained eventually.
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Princess Lydia · Elemental Joined: 12 Nov 2004 Posts: 679

Okay! Keep me posted on when you get the next part up!! Thanks! Very Happy

Nez · Posted: Sun Nov 21, 2004 5:31 pm Post subject:

Question: Any thoughts on how old Dhandi is?

I figured that she was eight years old when she and Eden first appeared in the series, so in about the time of her second appearance, she's eleven or ten.

Working on the story. Will post when chapter is up.
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Princess Lydia · Elemental Joined: 12 Nov 2004 Posts: 679

Great I can't wait!! Very Happy

Salukfan · Posted: Sun Nov 21, 2004 7:00 pm Post subject: