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AladdinsGenie
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 I love your posts
"Does anyone even care?"
"Chapter 4 is up!" |
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Nez
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| Posted: Tue Apr 19, 2005 5:47 pm Post subject: |
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| AladdinsGenie wrote: |
I love your posts
"Does anyone even care?"
"Chapter 4 is up!" |
I have a bad habit of putting things off. I started it, I gotta end it...in a good way, not a half-assed crappy way.
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Nez
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| Posted: Sun May 01, 2005 4:19 pm Post subject: |
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I'm writing chapter five. Now I need a title for it.
Those who actually care- Highlight the paragraph for a summary of the chapter if you have a suggestion.
Chaos spills about his "involvement" in bringing Mozenrath and Dhandi together to the sorcerer. He then turns the tables on Mozey, challenging him to a game of his own- have Dhandi return his "love" or never leave the labyrinth.
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Nez
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| Posted: Mon May 02, 2005 1:17 pm Post subject: |
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Oh, my writer's block.
I'm stuck on a dialouge between Mozey and Chaos.
I suck at fan fiction. Nobody cares. My life has no meaning now. 
Okay, gonna work through this pity party of one.
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AladdinsGenie
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Oh hush, that's not true  |
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Nez
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| Posted: Mon May 02, 2005 1:39 pm Post subject: |
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| AladdinsGenie wrote: |
| Oh hush, that's not true |
Yeah, but the part of the writer's block and me being stuck on the dialouge is.
*sighs* I'm pretty much just venting my frustration here.
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AladdinsGenie
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Try looking at a picture...that sometimes helps me.
Then again, I just like looking at Aladdin |
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Nez
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| Posted: Mon May 02, 2005 2:02 pm Post subject: |
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| AladdinsGenie wrote: |
Try looking at a picture...that sometimes helps me.
Then again, I just like looking at Aladdin |
Looking at my avatars. Now they're just creeping me out. I'm trying to write some more. Do you see him sputtering angrily when he's more or less backed into a corner?
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AladdinsGenie
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| Posted: Mon May 02, 2005 2:13 pm Post subject: |
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| Who Mozenrath? And in a physical corner? |
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Nez
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| AladdinsGenie wrote: |
| Who Mozenrath? And in a physical corner? |
Yes, and no, actually refering to a confrontation that he can't possibly get out off, courtesy of Chaos.
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AladdinsGenie
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| I'd say so. He was pretty pissed when he realized Khartoum tricked him and there was nothing he could do about it. It's almost like he throws a pissed off tantrum |
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Nez
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| AladdinsGenie wrote: |
| I'd say so. He was pretty pissed when he realized Khartoum tricked him and there was nothing he could do about it. It's almost like he throws a pissed off tantrum |
Ah, so I'm not too far off.
But Chaos is kinda hard.
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AladdinsGenie
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| Posted: Mon May 02, 2005 2:42 pm Post subject: |
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| What did you have originally? |
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Nez
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| Posted: Mon May 02, 2005 2:47 pm Post subject: |
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Okay, but some of this kinda spoilerish-
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“I take it you’re still grasping it,” Chaos grinned, “though it wasn’t so much as planning to bring you together as giving you a little push in that direction and letting you play it out on your own.”
Mozenrath growled as he reached for the cosmic feline, but only grabbed air as Chaos dissipated. The sorcerer snarled as he clenched his fist.
“WHAT RIGHT HAVE YOU TO TOY WITH ME!?” he bellowed.
“I told you,” the cat’s voice chimed. “You needed some change and of course, she was most unexpected. All of the other elements assumed a fellow sorceress or even a princess of unnatural beauty would have been the one.”
“You forget I’m married to my work,” Mozenrath replied, curtly. “I CAN’T afford such weakness.”
“Oh, but even then you believed it,” Chaos smirked (if it was possible for a disembodied voice to do). “You also believed it a minute ago.”
“What’s there to believe?” Mozenrath explained levelly, though still maroon with anger. “I was merely playing with the emotions of an impressionable child to my own ends. The ritual required her to do it of her own will and I wouldn’t be here defending myself if I hadn’t been proactive.”
“Yeah,” Chaos mewed, “but it got a little bit boring after you made your presence made to her genie with your usual threats, though the little foray into the Underworld was interesting. But, overall, it needed a twist.”
“A twist?” Mozenrath repeated incredulously. “A twist-” He sputtered angrily as he pulled out shard of translucent violet amethysts from his belt pouch. “I can’t be the butt of your jokes if I’m not here. Land of the Black Sand!”
He held the glowing shard above his head, as if waiting to attract a bolt of lightning. However, to his surprise, the shard made a few sparks before becoming dim. He inspected it for a moment, shaking it and tapping it against his palm a few times, before he grimaced sourly. The crystal that he had used to go in and out of the Chaotic Plains wasn’t working and he had a fairly good idea who was behind it.
“I see you want me to stick around longer, Chaos,” Mozenrath observed, calmly though scorn was clearly evident in his tone. “What is it now?”
“Just including you into the fun that Dhandi is going to have,” Chaos replied, reappearing upon the sorcerer’s shoulder. Mozenrath glared at him, bordering on resuming his fit. |
That's some of what I have so far. There was more at the begining, but then this post would have gotten very long.
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AladdinsGenie
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Yeah. that's great. I can hear him saying that in my head, so it's not awkward or anything  |
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