Hey, I just forgot to ask you something. Are you going to update more chapters?
I loved this chapter! This story is amazing and I like the way you write. The plot is original and... just amazing!
Thanks for writing this!
Please finnish!! I love it!!!!!
Whoever or whatever has Jasmine possessed doesn't sound too nice. lol. Good job!
lol. Let's hope Rajah won't have to get a hold of him.
Wow! Nice story plot! Love it! Update soon!
Author's Response: Glad you like it!
I personallyliked this chapter, but there is one thing I ddin't like to much. I didn't understand why they would just head to the citadel w/out real proof it was Mozenrath. It was just out of character.
Author's Response: Well this was originally my *first* story that I had written, NOT Final Fate and I had recently found the draft and I guess I didn't look everything over really well, there was ALOT that had to be changed in the draft (because it sucked). So what's on Magical Anniversary is the updated version. Thanks for catching that!
I love it!! Please update ASAP.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you like it, Rebecca! Usually my first stories really turn out...crappy. (This was the first story I had written before Final Fate)
Very intense. I'm glad Aladdin made it out okay! Update soon!
Author's Response: I hope you mean very intense in a good way! I can take the criticism LOL. I'll be sure to
Liking the story so far! Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you I'm workin on it
I like this story so far. I hope Al finds Jas a gift soon or he's toast! lol. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanx! Just a lil writer's block, hoping it's temporary! LOL