you have to finish! lol...
i love it and the suspence is killin me!
oh please! the next chapter pleeeaaase?
I can't wait Mariposa79!!!
same here! aladdin is cute but i'm trying to do the same thing!
same here! aladdin is cute but i'm trying to do the same thing!
aladdin sure is getting an update! considering the facy that aladdin goes back to around 44 b.c. makes it more interesting! this is a graet story keep it uo!
your stories are the best! the suspense and the plot are both great. keep 'em coming
you updated!! sry been busy, but i love the suspense...though i can't believe all the trouble sadira is going through to steal aladdin!
can't wait to see what else you have in store ;)
it's sooooooooooo cool what you did with the story of aladdin going to the future make more story's of them going to the year 3000
Just read chapter 1 so far. The plot looks interesting and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it. You've done a good job of getting most of the characters' voices down.
However, you were right and there are some grammatical errors; if you want I can email you a list or I can just go in and edit them myself, whichever. ^^
GREAT STORY! I can't wait for the next chapter!
I love present Aladdin stories, and you make the best!! I can't wait until the next chapter!!
OMG OMG I have to read more of this story I am flipping out!!! LOL ^_^
This story is TIGHT!! I have to give it to you Miranda, this story has just the right romantic/action that gets me addicted!
Geez, at last! I waited for it sooo long; I almost thought that you'd forgot about us...)))))))) Keep writing!
yessssssssssssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!you updated!!!!!!!!!!!! and helllll I LOVVEEEEEEEEEE THISSSSSSSSSS Chapter!!!
absolutly this is gettting sooo goodd.....and ill say it agian ...you are soooo darn talanted in writing ..and you made me smile right when jasmine said "is it safe" and aladdin said"yea , do u trust me" biggest smile on my face this whole month ..i swear !!and the romance in this chapter is perfect .. ..BRAVO!! BRAVO!!
**mary**