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Reviewer: Missy Eye Signed Date: 01/21/09 - 09:08PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh dear! I wonder how Jasmine could wait for Al for 6 years!
Great story so far!

Reviewer: inekjas Signed Date: 04/28/08 - 09:37AM Title: Chapter 4

Okay. First off, I have to thank Miss Cantare for reintroducing me to this story; it is seriously amazing.

I loved your portrayal of Mozenrath, still dark and arrogant, but there's something more to him now. I mean, Mozenrath is in love! That's so awesome, I could squeal. It's also nice to see him and aladdin as allies, albeit reluctant ones.

And Aladdin has a sinister past. DAMN. I don't think Disney ever saw that one coming. It's definitely keeping me on the edge of my seat though trying to figure out why he would have gone and what connection that fez would have with the ring and the red prince. I wonder if it could have any connection with that gaudy necklace jas was given. hmm... There's also the warning the goddess gave about absolute sacrifice. Could that be sacrificing his love for Jasmine or his life or his past? Man, this story has me hooked.

Your narration was wonderful throughout the story. I especially loved the scene with the goddess (and the pomegranate!) and the conversation between Iago and Saty. You really nailed the speech patterns of both of a child and a cranky, sarcastic parrot, who just happens to be one of my favorite characters.

Anyways, this is a great story, and I'm so glad you're planning on finishing this by the end of summer (hopefully!). Good luck writing!

Reviewer: char Anonymous Date: 08/21/06 - 09:46PM Title: Chapter 1

Please keep going with this one- wow did I feel like I was hanging reading the first two chapters! Love it a lot! Absolutely great and well written.

Reviewer: laurelstar73 Signed Date: 08/15/06 - 03:02PM Title: Chapter 2

hey there! i like it so far...though this roseau guy seems very crafty to me...lol

also very cool cliffhanger, it will be interesting to see where the story will lead!

Reviewer: Starz Anonymous Date: 08/14/06 - 11:38AM Title: Chapter 2

This is a remarkable story!! No joke! It is soo good, that it could be turned into a motion picture!! I really hope you make a chapter three, because it is really good!!

Reviewer: karith Anonymous Date: 08/11/06 - 05:51PM Title: Chapter 1

Please continue i hope that al and Jas get back together. they belong together compare to that snooty prince