Reviews For Come What May
Reviewer: persian85033 Signed
Date: 10/27/05 - 05:22PM
Title: A Race for your heart.
I love how they raced. You didn't by any chance watch Apuesta Por Un Amor, did you? I'm glad that Rajan finally stood up to his father and refused to cheat, and that Jasmine made him give Rajan his freedom to marry any one he wished. GREAT STORY.
Reviewer: persian85033 Signed
Date: 10/27/05 - 05:17PM
Title: A Forced Breakup.
I was so broken hearted, but glad that Jasmine decided to go back at last minute. That was hilarious about Genie playing the harmonica.lol
Reviewer: persian85033 Signed
Date: 10/27/05 - 05:11PM
Title: The Lover's runaway.
Why did Genie have to reveal himself?! The King seems to rule the sultan under an iron thumb.
Reviewer: persian85033 Signed
Date: 10/27/05 - 05:04PM
Title: What!?
I can't believe the Sultan would do that?!
Reviewer: persian85033 Signed
Date: 10/27/05 - 04:53PM
Title: Homecoming
Great story. I like that one of Jasmine's old suitors is at the party.
Reviewer: kelly Anonymous
Date: 06/25/05 - 06:12AM
Title: A Race for your heart.
this was a great story!! the ending was my fav!
Reviewer: lauren Anonymous
Date: 06/25/05 - 05:46AM
Title: Homecoming
i love the plot so far, you have a talent for suspense! keep up the great work!
Reviewer: Jess Anonymous
Date: 04/04/05 - 04:55PM
Title: Homecoming
loved the story.I like the way you write about how much Aladdin and Jasmine love eachother....you should write more
Author's Response: Thank you! I love the romance that goes between them. They should always be together and I'm keeping that way. But, I am working on another one. I'm doing research right now. It should be up pretty soon!
Reviewer: Rebecca Anonymous
Date: 03/04/05 - 08:19PM
Title: A Race for your heart.
Wow! great story! it's one of my faves.
Author's Response: I'm honored that this is one of your faves. I'm really excited that I get new reviews from other people. Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Nikki Anonymous
Date: 03/04/05 - 02:22PM
Title: Homecoming
Hey! That was an awesome story. It had a really good plot to it and all. Just watch the punctuation and you'll be fine!
Author's Response: Thank you Nikki. The story was adapted to the Moulin Rouge ( my favorite movie) but mines ended up happily. I hope that I'm allowed to do that since other stories out there are adapted to Shakespeare, movies and other fairy tale stories.
Reviewer: mysticmeg Anonymous
Date: 03/03/05 - 03:31PM
Title: Homecoming
I'm liking the plot line of this story. I like the dialogue alot, and the romance is just right. Although, you have TONS of spelling mistakes. You're using the wrong endings for words, over and over again... you change the tenses like 2 times in each sentence. It can confuse, and annoy people. Other than that, YOU GOT IT!
Author's Response: Thanks I'll keep editing to change my mistakes. Thanks for your review! I was worried that the romance was too mushy but I'm glad to you that it's just right.