Hi! The story really showed how Jasmine felt before she met Aladdin as a teenager. Keep up the good work!
Hey there! My name is Sadira. I hope you're doing well. I just read your story, "A Lonely Life" and it was WONDERFUL! I can't wait to read more stories from you. I enjoyed reading this story very much. It gave me an insite into Jasmine's life when she was little and it was really fun to read. I know what Jasmine feels like. I really feel like she and I share a special bond. Your story was very good. If you want to write one with me, I'd be more than happy to write with you! Sadira
I liked it a lot and found it very entertaining. I like how you gave Aladdin a boyish but fun character. Though there were a lot of grammatical errors and it was stated in the Aladdin movie that Jasmine had never been outside the palace walls or met Aladdin. :-)